Tuesday 23 October 2018

My Crocodile Island descriptive writing

2 comments:

  1. Hi I am Alaska from Karoro School. That is really good writing Indi I really know what your talking about. Maybe next time instead of saying salty blue fresh water you should just say fresh blue water or salty blue water because fresh water is different from salty water.

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  2. Hi Alaska, Indi here. Thank you for commenting on my blog! Next time I will think more carefully about my vocabulary. Thanks again.

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