Tuesday 20 November 2018

My 10th Birthday Sleepover

2 comments:

  1. Hi Indi I'm Alaska from Karoro School. I really like your writing. I think it tells a lot about what you did and I can say that because I was there. I also like how you put speech marks when Billie was talking.

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  2. Hi Alaska, thank you for commenting on my blog. I made sure I used punctuation for a good piece of writing. Thanks again.

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