Kia ora Indi, Alaska and Sapphire. You have completed a great piece of collaborative writing here that shows your learning about the pōwhiri process. Your work was beautifully presented and it was good to see that it was separated into clear paragraphs. You had good spelling and punctuation. Your next step is to use more complex punctuation and to learn to create paragraphs with an introductory sentence and concluding sentence. When we go to the marae I can see you will certainly know what to do during the pōwhiri.
Kia ora Indi, Alaska and Sapphire. You have completed a great piece of collaborative writing here that shows your learning about the pōwhiri process. Your work was beautifully presented and it was good to see that it was separated into clear paragraphs. You had good spelling and punctuation. Your next step is to use more complex punctuation and to learn to create paragraphs with an introductory sentence and concluding sentence. When we go to the marae I can see you will certainly know what to do during the pōwhiri.
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