Packing Our Bags For The Bottom Of The Ocean

WALT: develop our own poem in response to our model ( packing my bags for... By James Norcliffe)

WALT: use an increasingly descriptive vocabulary to add interest to our writing.

WALT have some fun and be creative with ideas and imagination.

Here is my poem that I worked with Billie on

( my partner )

Packing Our Bags For The 

Bottom Of The Ocean

One blackalicious, metallic, small stoned outside,

 spongey memory foam, warm and cosy inside,

 portable elevator 

to carry us to the bottom of the ocean 

to discover new species of fish.

A thick glowing, to cast light,

 blankety blanket,  in hypothermic prevention material

With clear wiggly tubes disappearing into your body carrying
oxygen 

 Specially adapted water pressure wetsuit

For exploring our underwater environment.

A pair of knee high, multi colored rainbow tie dye, pink bows for
good vibes, rubber steel cap, snuggly wuggly, patterned
embroidered boots

 so we don’t cut our feet on the slippery  slimy rocks 

on the bottom of the ocean. 

Green night vision goggles, soft, icy cold, elephant weight
heavy,  spot lights with optional shades of light at the front of
the helmet.  

And my Assistant

In case I get lonely.

By Indi And Billie.