Haiku Modern
Lady of the Lake
Crossing Lake Wakatipu
Docking at the farm
Haiku Traditional
Plants in Mum’s garden
Sprouting away happily
Scrumptious in my mouth
Tanka Modern
Cassie ran away
Sneaking away from the house
Caught by a kind man
Acts like nothing happened
Good lesson for her owners
Tanka Traditional
Playing basketball
Last game of the season
Four fouls that I got
Uh oh, almost too many
My coach had to take me off
By Indi
These are fantastic Indi! Well done :-)
ReplyDeleteHi, thanks for commenting on my poems!
ReplyDeleteNice job Indi,
ReplyDeleteI have to say that the Tanka Modern was my favourite... I can relate!