Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hello I'm Alaska from Karoro School. I like how you told us a lot about the story so we really know what's going on. It made me think of how hard it was for them. Maybe next time you should change the colour of the letters so we can read it better.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Hello I'm Alaska from Karoro School. I like how you told us a lot about the story so we really know what's going on. It made me think of how hard it was for them. Maybe next time you should change the colour of the letters so we can read it better.
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