Bula Indira my name is Fila I like how you described what the beach looked like, tasted like smelt and sounds like. sometimes it was hard to read some of the words have you considered changing the colour of your words so that they are easy to be seen. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://odssionelo.blogspot.com
Bonjour Fila, I'm Indi from Karoro School. Thank you so much for commenting on my blog!!! Next time I will make the writing easier to read. Thanks again.
Bula Indira my name is Fila I like how you described what the beach looked like, tasted like smelt and sounds like. sometimes it was hard to read some of the words have you considered changing the colour of your words so that they are easy to be seen. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is https://odssionelo.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteBonjour Fila, I'm Indi from Karoro School. Thank you so much for commenting on my blog!!! Next time I will make the writing easier to read. Thanks again.
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