( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.
Wednesday 27 March 2019
If I Had Wings...
For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This weeks task was a poem about If I Had Wings... First we had to answer some questions and then we had to colour in the piece of paper with the poem. Last of all we had to write our own If I Had Wings poem. We had to use sticky
( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.
( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.
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I am looking forward to reading this! I can't seem to open the link to the poem though...
ReplyDeleteI hope you like my poem when you read it. Miss Ireland said for you to come and see her about my blog. From Indi
ReplyDeleteHi Indi. You have written a beautiful 'If I had wings' poem. You used all the senses and again used some interesting vocabulary and language features to make our imaginations come to life. I like how you described the moon as being creamy, luscious cheese. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Indi, it's Ilish here.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used sticky words like glistening or luscious and rhyming words like soaring and roaring.
Thank you for commenting on my poem.
ReplyDeleteHi Indi, this is a really good poem. You used great descriptive words and you definitely used all five senses. I like the paragraph about the moon the most.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards Hannah, Keep up the great work!
Hi Indi, this is Jordyn
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem, it's nice and puts a nice picture in the readers head๐๐๐๐๐
Wow Indi what a cool poem you have here. The photo up the top that's flying is really cool.
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